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I haven't much talent at flash, I really need someone to teach me in person as I can't even tween properly. And please delete my older, noobish reviews, I sucked back then and I know it.
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"Yes! Another decent 40k flash!"
Good work again dude, but try to move away from the stick figures when your animating skills improve, it makes things so much better, but I've tried animating myself and failed miserably so I know how hard it is.
The trick with Tau is markerlights on the Shas'ui, then you gain the lovely BS4, or if you have the points, take some marker drones.
Keep on animating, I like this stuff! :)
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Like I said, theres great humour here, you should work on your graphics a bit more; putting in a simple background like a cratered, dark, warzone would be a good idea as a plain, empty background is a little off-putting and distracting, not to mention a little hard on the eyes.
Great to see some new 40k stuff on NG, please do some more and well done on the animating, it was pretty smooth and convincing, try finding some more sounds too, theres plenty out there. :)
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have any good sites to suggest? been getting all my main sounds off of Dawn of War
has pretty much all I need for guns and explosions
yeah and no more white background, although Im not too good at the beckground part
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Thank you for finally doing part two, the graphics were well done, and the animation was pretty smooth, though I couldn't hear what the Sarge was yelling and my only other nitpicks are that Space Marines wouldn't sit around dumbfounded like hell, they'd either run for it and live to fight another day or open fire.
But overall you've done a fantastic job brining 40k to life!
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Although those many Star Destroyers would have gunned them down in 2 seconds flat, I was amazed by this animation that puts the light on the real heroes.
The Millennium Falcon is just a modified freighter based off a common mass produced model, plus if you look at the one in this movie, its a different design altogether. Fett's ship is a high end police ship, several Firespray class ships were made.
Please do more animations like this! I love them! :D And we all do know that Star Wars isn't real, but is inspired by real things.
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You can animate well, but your graphics could do with a facelift, there were white backgrounds in places which really made the whole thing look terrible in places, even just a bit of gradient colour would fix that problem.
The music didn't really fit in well, somthing a bit more dramatic and heavier would work well here, just dig into the Audio Portal. :-)
I would like to see the sequel, as you are clearly a good animator in the making.
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"Not bad but needs some serious work...."
This has potential but please do not put the swastika on anything to do with Warhammer please, it is easy to see the inspirations from WWII in WH40k but again, please do not add Nazis, might I recommend replacing it with a custom logo with an evil looking skull or something like that as it really spoiled the movie and altering the Chaos Marine's salute to a clenched fist over their chest plates or even just a more traditional salute.
The graphics were ok but have room for improvement but the animating itself was pretty good though.
Learn from your mistakes and re-think your Chaos lords design with somthing more imaginitive, renemeber he doesn't have to be very human at all since its chaos after all!
Whilst it was a good idea to include an inspiring speech, it doesn't fit in very well, why not see if you can get someone to do some voice acting for you and make a more Imperial style speech about dying glouriously for the Emperor and holding back the tide of heretics and traitors.
Keep working on your flash movies! :) Don't give up!
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The animation was very smooth and fluid but it could do with being a bit longer and have a more interesting ending rather than just ending suddenly.
Keep working, its looking good, will look at some of your other flash work.
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The 3D graphics were very smooth and of high quality but the way the ball moved was too 'linear' and didn't have the feel of a real pinball's movement. But overall I liked it. :)
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This is one of the greatest flash games i have had the pleasure of playing. One problem though, got to night 20, beat all the zombies and the level doesn't end... but apart from that, its hugely entertaining and filled with blood! :D
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As said before, what an unheroic way to go! A great mix of humour and fine animation, love the style of graphics and thier quality too! Please do more flash work! Love it! :D
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